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Q4 - Limited research indicates

by WaltGrace1983 Tue Mar 25, 2014 7:09 pm

This is a STRENGTHEN the argument question so let's start by analyzing the core.

Therapeutic intervention before onset of mental disorders can mitigate contributors to them
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Research is needed to both (1) verify these results and (2) design health care measures
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We should increase funding for research

This is a very subjective conclusion, i.e. that we "should" do something. How do we strengthen a claim like this? Typically we do this by showing that what the author claims we "should" do - in this case, research - is actually worth doing. The correct answer will typically show some kind of benefit to that thing that we "should do."

(A) This is comparing minor mental disorders with minor health problems. I just don't know how this is irrelevant and it certainly doesn't help the conclusion.

(B) This is just giving more detail about how research will be conducted. We don't need to know anything about that. We just need to know if this research is even worth doing.

(C) This one looks pretty good! It is saying that reducing the risk factors, i.e. those things that would be reduced if we could do more therapeutic intervention, is pretty cheap in comparison to actually treating the mental disorders long-term. This provides a reason why the research is worth doing!

(D) That's great but it doesn't help answer why we should increase funding! In fact, it perhaps provides a reason for not increasing the funding - after all, it is already really high!

(E) This is kind of irrelevant. This is talking about what happens after someone gets a mental disorder - we want to focus on what happens before.



(C) is obviously the best answer here and the only one that strengthens. If we accept (C), we have a good reason to increase funding for research because, if we do so, it will allow us to help mitigate mental disorders before they happen - thus saving money in the long run.
 
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Re: Q4 - Limited research indicates

by judy.kang020 Tue Mar 31, 2015 3:03 pm

WaltGrace1983 Wrote:This is a STRENGTHEN the argument question so let's start by analyzing the core.

Therapeutic intervention before onset of mental disorders can mitigate contributors to them
+
Research is needed to both (1) verify these results and (2) design health care measures
→
We should increase funding for research

This is a very subjective conclusion, i.e. that we "should" do something. How do we strengthen a claim like this? Typically we do this by showing that what the author claims we "should" do - in this case, research - is actually worth doing. The correct answer will typically show some kind of benefit to that thing that we "should do."

(A) This is comparing minor mental disorders with minor health problems. I just don't know how this is irrelevant and it certainly doesn't help the conclusion.

(B) This is just giving more detail about how research will be conducted. We don't need to know anything about that. We just need to know if this research is even worth doing.

(C) This one looks pretty good! It is saying that reducing the risk factors, i.e. those things that would be reduced if we could do more therapeutic intervention, is pretty cheap in comparison to actually treating the mental disorders long-term. This provides a reason why the research is worth doing!

(D) That's great but it doesn't help answer why we should increase funding! In fact, it perhaps provides a reason for not increasing the funding - after all, it is already really high!

(E) This is kind of irrelevant. This is talking about what happens after someone gets a mental disorder - we want to focus on what happens before.



(C) is obviously the best answer here and the only one that strengthens. If we accept (C), we have a good reason to increase funding for research because, if we do so, it will allow us to help mitigate mental disorders before they happen - thus saving money in the long run.


I narrowed it down to a completely different argument core. So please correct me if I'm wrong...

I thought the key term in the conclusion was "to cost effectively." So the assumption was in the term shift:

Does verifying research + design health care measures = cost effective?

But in this sense, I don't see how the first sentence is relevant. Is it the context or a premise?
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Re: Q4 - Limited research indicates

by maryadkins Sun Apr 05, 2015 4:32 pm

Yeah, cost-effective is a gap, too (though the word "potential" softens that a bit, right?). There are a couple here. But Walt's right that whenever you leap to "should" from some facts, there's usually an inherent gap there in jumping from fact to opinion.

I'd say the first sentence is a premise. It's supporting the conclusion, right? That makes it a premise. You can have more than one premise and that is certainly the case here:

intervention can mitigate mental disorders
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more research is needed to know for sure
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to explore this thing that might be cost-effective we should fund research
 
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Re: Q4 - Limited research indicates

by judaydaday Mon Apr 06, 2015 2:22 pm

maryadkins Wrote:Yeah, cost-effective is a gap, too (though the word "potential" softens that a bit, right?). There are a couple here. But Walt's right that whenever you leap to "should" from some facts, there's usually an inherent gap there in jumping from fact to opinion.

I'd say the first sentence is a premise. It's supporting the conclusion, right? That makes it a premise. You can have more than one premise and that is certainly the case here:

intervention can mitigate mental disorders
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more research is needed to know for sure
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to explore this thing that might be cost-effective we should fund research


So,generally, for subjective conclusions (should/ought), the focus of the argument is on the why?

In this instance, why should you fund research?

If this was a weaken question, you would need choose an AC for why you shouldn't?
 
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Re: Q4 - Limited research indicates

by donghai819 Tue May 10, 2016 9:09 am

It is clear that "known risk factors" in C would refer to "factors identified as major contributors" in the stimulus. "The long term treatment required" appears to vaguely refer to "the design of specific health care measure". The latter reference is much vaguer than the former.